Tentative+script

Is it agreed that we will each record and voiceover our part and send our .mov to Laura to edit together? ~ not hearing much feedback, is everyone ok with the project? I'm not seeing much on our discussion? So I decided to post it out here. To help, I have read our parts and added the approx. time it took, we are at about 1 min 9 sec. Dr. A said we definitely needed to try to keep it as close to 1 min as possible. My opinion is the us 3 in the middle need to make sure we can get our information in as few seconds as possible so Suzanne has time to give the personal information, her face is "our face" for IBC awareness. Sounds like a plan to me. I am hoping my Flip video will be good enough to use. It is the only one I have that loads and edits quickly from USB. Tammy I got my part down to 11 seconds. I can record it faster if needed. I think your flip with work fine, we use them at school, too. It was running long even before the additions. I will try to speed up. I have my video shot and have sent it in for developing from Walmart. BAD idea. I got a blank video back. This has been my week. Sorry guys. I have some shots with a little glare. I hope it will be fine. I had to go for some more tests today. Should be OK. Hope your tests come out ok, prayers Thanks. I am used to it. The Lord watches over us. Thanks for posting here. I found Suzanne's Audacity and will add mine today. This is all new to me so the sooner I can get the pieces to start putting together the better. I will have to be gone to a conference Sunday afternoon unitl Tues night and will not have much chance to work on project then so the sooner I can get things the better.-Deiss Be sure to highlight the script you actually used for your recording so we can crate a new page with our final script on it. After we record our parts and Laura puts them together we can transcribe our script to the "final script" page. Great work everyone!!Jackie

TITLE: Inflammatory Breast Cancer ~ IBC ~ What YOU should know! {or Know the signs!} which one do you like? (any other suggestions?) I really like Know the Signs but since we are not really going over the signs as much as just knowing the disease we should stick with What YOU Should Know ! (Ok, sounds good we'll keep the original title) Voice 1: SUZANNE :   [SHOT 1 - Tight shot on child, then SHOT 2 - widen shot to son and his mother]  This is my son Dylan and {pause in audio} he was 3 when I was diagnosed with inflammatory breast cancer. Before 2004 I knew nothing about IBC then it rocked my world. There was no history of breast cancer in my family so I didn’t pay attention when I began to swell, get a rash, and have a bloody discharge. I didn’t think cancer because there was no lump. (approx 24 sec) Voice 2: TAMMY [SHOT 3 - a shot of 4 women and then SHOT 4 - bring in a tight shot of one woman] The scariest thing is that it is the most aggressive type of breast cancer so if you have these symptoms please consult your doctor. Many times these symptoms are confused with an infection. ( approx 12 sec) Pictures of random women? Showing it could be anyone.... I didn't find an exact statistic on this but I did read that 1 in every 4 women will be affected by cancer so if you have a shot of 4 women and then bring in a tight shot of one it would show the statistic visually. Jackie: Good idea! Rewording of Voice 2 (Tammy) The scariest thing is that this is the most aggresive type of breast cancer. Many times the symptoms of IBC are confused with an infection so please consult your doctor if you have these symptoms. 11 Seconds! Since my narration didn't really fit my shot ideas I added a Woordle and a Power Point slide to the Audacity Recording page. I also sent these in email format to Laura. The rubric listed items other than video that needed to be included in the PSA so hopefully, these will help address those requirements but it will NOT bother me if no one wants to use them. (Tammy)

Voice 3: LAURA [SHOT 5 - a shot of random men and then SHOT 6 - African American women] And don’t think you are safe because you are a man. Men can get IBC as well, it just isn’t as likely. Also, black women are more likely than others to develop it. The risk of inflammatory breast cancer increases with age. (approx. 14 sec.) Show a picture of your husband (or random men) for this shot, and if you have an African American female friend would be good to add here.(Deiss) 5% of diagnosed breast cancer is inflammatory breast cancer. Most are diagnosed in later stages. Jackie: add something about, It's important to get and know the facts. And don't think you are safe becasue you are a man. Men can get IBC as well, it just insn't as likely. Also African American women are more likely than others to develop it. The risk of inflammatory breast cancer increases with age but even young people at develope IBC. 5% of all diagnosed breast cancer is inflammatory breast cancer. Most are diagnosed in later stages due to lack of education about recognizing the disease. Laura, your part is 26 sec long, adding that to my 13 and Tammy's 11 that is 50 sec which only leaves 10 sec for Suzzane to introduce and close our PSA, we can only have 60 seconds.

Voice 4: JACKIE [SHOT 7 - A yellow rose tipped in pink with the Website and phone number on the shot] 5 years ago, most people knew nothing about Inflammatory Breast Cancer. Help us save lives. Please, tell everyone you know about IBC, get screened, and tell your friends to get screened. (approx 11 sec.) {Captions} Inflammatory Breast Cancer Research Foundation Website and phone number: www.ibcresearch.org  1-877-STOP-IBC (1-877-786-7422) Jackie, we may need to change the script here because you really don't get "screened". When you get the symptoms you need to go in. How about saying this: This is the final script I went with below: 13 seconds.Jackie 5 years ago, most people knew nothing about Inflammatory Breast Cancer. Now we need your help to spread the word to save lives. If you know someone with redness, itching, or discharge encourage them to get it checked out.

I totally meant to ask you or look that up to see how to say that, I will record that, thanks! Voice 1:  SUZANNE   [SHOT 8 - a family playing together then SHOT 9 zoom shot in on the Mother]  Today, I have a husband and three children and I am still around to enjoy them. (Approx 6 sec) Put a family picture up here

Jackie: Last night on the web conf, Dr. A said everyone in the group must submit voice over for our PSA.This will work out great, Suzanne is this about you? or someone else in the group, if so they can start and end the script, the other 3 can each take part of the middle section Yes this is about me. ﻿ 